Sense karearea

I see Ozzy eating some meat. I love his beautiful black eyes

I smell   some meat, blood and feathers.    

I hear  squawking and Ozzy mmmmmming as he tears the meat up.

I feel Ozzy's heavy weight on my arm.

I think  this falcon is awesome and clever!

diamante poem

Diamante Poem

WALT entertain the reader - Diamantes are diamond-shaped poems ‘that contrast’ two nouns.

Success Criteria:

Step 1:  Think of two nouns that are complete opposite of each other.  Write one on Line 1 and the other on Line 7.

Step 2:  On Line 2, write two adjectives that describe the noun on Line 1.

Step 3:  On Line 3, write three “-ing” words (verbs) that relate to Line 1.

Step 4:  On Line 4, write a short phrase about line 1 and line 7.

Step 5:  On Line 5, write three “-ing” words (verbs) that relate to Line 7

Step 6:  On Line 6, write two adjectives that describe the noun on Line 7.

Step 7:  On Line 7 you will have your noun that you thought of in Step 1.

Winter

Frosty, bright

Skiing, snowball fighting, sledding

Icicles and snowflakes, family holidays

Swimming, suntanning, sweltering

Hot, sunny

Summer

Now have a go at writing your own diamante poem.

WOLf

Predator, grey

Hunting, killing, eating

Hunting all day … wolf’s prey

Grazing, moving, protecting

Brown, powerful

Moose

Hockey

Shinpads, fast

Tackling, shooting, scoring

Practice all day… saving goals

Stopping, standing, sliding

Padded,  gear

Goaly

Cinquain Poem

Purpose: to entertain

Success Criteria

1. Subject
2. 2 adjectives (describing words) to tell about the subject
3. 3 verbs (interesting doing words) ending in ‘ing’ that also tell about the subject
4. A phrase to tell about how the subject feels or what it does
5. A word describing the first line or choose another adjective

Motor

Noisy, loud

Speeding, winning, amazing

Fast, super awesome bikes

MotoGP

The learning powers I used were Managing distractions and perseverance because I need to be able to get my work done.

pet P.B.L

JAMES

My Creature is a Peregrine Falcon.

Some things I needed to consider about my creature: It needs food, water and space. A peregrine falcon needs a speed area, feeding area and bed area.

My enclosure has these special features for my pet: The feeding area for hunting and killing food for it to eat.   The speed area was for it to practice flying and seeing how fast it can go. The bed area was for relaxation and breeding.

What I am pleased about: the paint because it was camouflage  with lots of colors.the lid has a hole were it can go in and out.   the lerning bilding power I uesd is persverins

What I have found tricky: nothing next time I need to make it harder

What I would like to improve: NOT PAINTING! Because it made me not get my p.b.l done.

Insert photos here

Camp Omatua

It was fun having a drive in movie for the first time in my life.	It was hard paddling upstream the river.
Mum is helping with the kayaks.	Omatua stew is yum.